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Mystery by ArtsyCutiePrincess

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Name: Mystery (she doesn't have a name)
Age: 18
Background: Abused when her father died at a very young age. She was born deaf and blind. Abused for her disabilities.

Nothing much to say about this one other than the hand but I'm pretty proud of this one
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glibmonster Featured By Owner May 13, 2017
Hi! Now then, imma be honest here, the colors are quite nice, and are quite calming. Hard to find in a character. The hand, and the shading are nice, to be honest as well.

But, the age being '18' is something I'm half and half on. Yes, 18 is an adult, but 18 is also a common Mary Sue age. Try making her about 20, that way she's still young, and that's one less thing you have to worry about. Once again, it's advice.

The background I do NOT like. One of her parents are dead, and she was abused. Those are two VERY common Mary Sue traits. I would also suggest giving more data about her. Such as
Personality,
Likes,
Dislikes,
Family,
More backstory,
etc.

And I would suggest making the back round a light grey, or a light color.

Once again, it is all a suggestion.
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ArtsyCutiePrincess Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Also, I don't really do backgrounds (yet) is because I'm trying to figure out how to draw properly and so I focus more on the character and try to get feedback on it. But again, I will try taking your suggestion in mind :)
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ArtsyCutiePrincess Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the suggestion, I will try keeping it in mind. I actually have been meaning on trying to update on the information but I've been busy lately so I'll change it. This character is actually going to be part oc a story I wanna do when I get better with art (cause I wanna do a comic) so there's a reason some of the information is the way it is
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glibmonster Featured By Owner May 13, 2017
Thank you for taking it kindly! And honestly, your art is really good. Just work on in detail design.
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ArtsyCutiePrincess Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Eh, I'm not that good and I really shouldn't start off on the anime style xD. I'm self taught and I only took two art classes in high school before I switched to homeschool so I'm gonna keep trying to I can take classes in college. Thank you for the tips though :)
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glibmonster Featured By Owner May 13, 2017
Actually, your art fits the style. I mean this by the eyes look like they belong in the style. If you have big, anime eyes in a very detailed, and realistic piece, then a lot of people (including myself) have a problem. Thank you for taking it kindly, and once again, your art is very good!
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ArtsyCutiePrincess Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Well, the only reason I have her eyes like that is because I wanted a way to show people that she's blind and since I really don't know how to mix and blend colors that well (cause I wanted to have like monochromatic colors blended together to show blindness) so I just went with what you see in the drawing instead. Not saying I make the eyes too detailed or anything, but it just seems I try too hard and I should go for a more simple style
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glibmonster Featured By Owner May 13, 2017
Oh. Honestly, don't change your style unless it's required to get to where you want to go, or unless you want to.
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ArtsyCutiePrincess Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Well, I do wanna have the anime style but now that I think about it, I don't think I should start off with an anime style to try and learn on how to draw
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